only other thing I noticed was that December should be capitalised in
the section
"the Rockbox project started in december 2001"

good luck
Alistair

On 05/03/2008, Daniel Stenberg <daniel_at_rockbox.org> wrote:
> On Tue, 4 Mar 2008, Jerry Van Baren wrote:
>
> > Here are a few mostly minor English tweaks.
>
>
> Thanks! And thank you Mike Giacomelli too for the section 5 improvement. Your
> updates were merged into the new version I attach here.
>
> I think this is now food enough for submission, but I'll still wait another
> day or two in case someone else feels there's some nits to pick...
>
>
> --
> Daniel Stenberg -- http://www.rockbox.org/ -- http://daniel.haxx.se/
>

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Alistair Marshall
www.thatscottishengineer.co.uk