From: Mark Bright <mark_at_redbreva.co.uk>
Date: Wed, 14 Jul 2004 07:38:28 +0100

Christi,

Initial impressions are good, like the much simplified "Getting Started"
section

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Index - page number are all one out?
Appendices / Whats new since 2.0 :
        A cross reference to within the document for each "New" feature
would be useful
        B minor type on "RVF Suppor"
        C Details for 2.2 and 2.3 seem a bit thin on the ground.
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Overall, good work...

Mark


|-----Original Message-----
|From: rockbox-bounces_at_cool.haxx.se
|[mailto:rockbox-bounces_at_cool.haxx.se] On Behalf Of Christi
|Alice Scarborough
|Sent: 14 July 2004 01:31
|To: Rockbox development
|Subject: Announcement: Rockbox 2.3 manual - first draft
|
|Feedback welcome. (Bear in mind I may ignore grammar pedantry
|or criticisms of my asthetic sense.)
|
|http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~christi/public/rockbox/rockb
ox-manual-2.3-draft-1.pdf
|
|Thanks,
|
|Christi
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