From: Daniel Stenberg <daniel_at_rockbox.org>
Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2004 23:18:54 +0100 (CET)

On Mon, 6 Dec 2004, Christ Alice Scarborough wrote:

Great manual!

> please let me know of any mistakes you can spot ASAP.

Here's a few remarks from me:

1 - The web site is nowadays known as: http://www.rockbox.org/ (page 3,
     page 8 and more)

2 - "won't invalidate your Archos warranty" (page 8) might be a bit too much
     to claim. Users have been refused to get their warranty claims acknowleged
     by Archos when they've sent back units with Rockbox installed.

     The phrase should probably need "after having been removed" appended
     or something.

3 - typo: "theon-screen" should be "the on-screen" (page 9)

4 - On page 66 where you describe the 'convbdf' tool it could be suitable
     to mention that the source code is in the general tools/ source
     directory and the tool is built when running make in it. (For those that
     have a build environment setup.)

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  Daniel Stenberg -- http://www.rockbox.org/ -- http://daniel.haxx.se/
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Received on 2004-12-06