Index: manual/platform/recorder.tex =================================================================== --- manual/platform/recorder.tex (revision 19939) +++ manual/platform/recorder.tex (working copy) @@ -11,7 +11,6 @@ \newcommand{\playertype}{Recorder} \newcommand{\playerlongtype}{Recorder 6, 10, 15 and 20} \newcommand{\genericimg}{112x64x1} - \newcommand{\specimg}{recorder} %Used to name the player, e.g. ...to the \dap \newcommand{\dap}{player} Index: manual/getting_started/installation.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/installation.tex (revision 19939) +++ manual/getting_started/installation.tex (working copy) @@ -17,9 +17,8 @@ } \opt{e200,c200}{ \note{Rockbox doesn't function on the newer v2 models. They can be identified - by checking the Sandisk firmware version number under - Settings $\rightarrow$ Info. The v1 - firmware is named 01.xx.xx, while the v2 firmware begins with 03.} + by checking the Sandisk firmware version number under Settings $\rightarrow$ Info. + The v1 firmware is named 01.xx.xx, while the v2 firmware begins with 03.} } \section{Overview} @@ -212,9 +211,7 @@ \subsubsection{Choosing a Rockbox version}\label{sec:choosing_version} There are three different types of firmware binaries available from the -Rockbox website: -\label{Version} -Release version, current build and daily build. You need to decide which one +Rockbox website: Release version, current build and daily build. You need to decide which one you want to install and get the appropriate version for your \dap{}. \begin{description} @@ -229,10 +226,10 @@ the time is safe to use. You can download the current build from \url{http://build.rockbox.org/}. -\item[Archived Build.] In addition to the release version and the current build, +\item[Daily Build.] In addition to the release version and the current build, there is also an archive of daily builds available for download. These are built once a day from the latest source code in the SVN repository. You can - download archived builds from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. + download daily builds from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. \end{description} @@ -294,7 +291,7 @@ \nopt{player}{ \subsubsection{Installing the fonts package}{\index{Installation!Fonts}\label{sec:installing_fonts} Rockbox has a fonts package that is available at - \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml} or from the \emph{extras} link in + \url{http://www.rockbox.org/twiki/bin/view/Main/RockboxExtras} or from the \emph{extras} link in the menu on the Rockbox website. The fonts package rarely changes and is therefore not included in the firmware \fname{.zip} file. When installing Rockbox for the first time, you should install the fonts package. @@ -329,7 +326,7 @@ \subsection{Enabling Speech Support (optional)}\label{sec:enabling_speech_support} \index{Speech}\index{Installation!Optional Steps} -If you wish to use speech support you will also need a voice file, English ones +If you wish to use speech support you will also need a voice file; English ones are available from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. Download the ``voice'' package for your player and unzip it directly to the root of your \dap. You should now find an \fname{english.voice} in the \fname{/.rockbox/langs} @@ -347,7 +344,7 @@ for a couple of seconds until the \dap{} resets. Now Rockbox should load. } % \opt{e200}{Your e200 will automatically reboot and Rockbox should load. }% -When you see the Rockbox splash screen, Rockbox is loaded and ready for +When you see the Rockbox main menu, Rockbox is loaded and ready for use. \opt{ipod}{ @@ -363,9 +360,7 @@ \section{Updating Rockbox} Updating Rockbox is easy even if you do not use the Rockbox Utility. -Download a Rockbox build. -(The latest release of the Rockbox software will always be available from -\url{http://www.rockbox.org/download/}). Unzip the build to the root directory +Download a Rockbox build. Unzip the build to the root directory of your \dap{} like you did in the installation stage. If your unzip program asks you whether to overwrite files, choose the ``Yes to all'' option. The new build will be installed over your current build. Index: manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex (revision 19939) +++ manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex (working copy) @@ -16,18 +16,17 @@ \begin{enumerate} -\item Make sure you are logged into your computer as Administrator, or a -user with Administrator privileges and connect your \dap{}. If you have -configured iTunes to open automatically when your \dap{} is attached -(the default behaviour), then wait for it to open and then quit it. You -also need to ensure the ``Enable use as disk'' option is enabled for -your \dap{} in iTunes. +\item Make sure you have Administrator privileges on your computer and +connect your \dap{}. If you have configured iTunes to open automatically +when your \dap{} is attached (the default behaviour), then wait for it +to open and then quit it. You also need to ensure the ``Enable use as disk'' +option is enabled for your \dap{} in iTunes. \item Download ipodpatcher.exe from \download{bootloader/ipod/ipodpatcher/win32/ipodpatcher.exe} and run it. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message @@ -64,7 +63,7 @@ drag the ipodpatcher icon to a location on your hard drive and launch it from the Terminal. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you @@ -113,7 +112,7 @@ \warn{You may need to be the root user in order for ipodpatcher to have sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.} -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader Index: manual/getting_started/main.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/main.tex (revision 19939) +++ manual/getting_started/main.tex (working copy) @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ are usually around. Just join and ask -- if someone knows the answer you'll usually get an answer pretty quickly. More information including IRC logs can be found at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/irc/}. We also have a web client -for joining the rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you +for joining the Rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you to install additional software to your computer. If you think you have found a bug please make sure it actually is a bug and is Index: manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex (revision 19939) +++ manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex (working copy) @@ -1,18 +1,18 @@ % $Id$ % -\opt{e200}{\fixme{NOTE: These instructions will not work on the +\opt{e200}{\warn{These instructions will not work on the ``Rhapsody'' version of the E200 series (also known as E200R). Please follow the instructions at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/twiki/bin/view/Main/SansaE200RInstallation}.}} -\warn{If your \daps{} original firmware starts with a version number of 03.XX.XX, then do \emph{not} proceed with these install instructions. +\warn{If your \daps{} original firmware starts with a version number of 03.XX.XX, +then do \emph{not} proceed with these install instructions. If your \daps{} original firmware starts with 01.XX.XX, then you can install Rockbox.} In order to make your \playertype{} load and execute the Rockbox firmware you -have just installed, you will need to install the Rockbox -bootloader. Unless bugs are found in the bootloader code, or -significant new features are added, you will only have to perform this -step once. +have just installed, you will need to install the Rockbox bootloader. +Unless bugs are found in the bootloader code, or significant new features +are added, you will only have to perform this step once. These steps use the sansapatcher tool. Source code is available in the Rockbox SVN repository (\url{http://svn.rockbox.org/viewvc.cgi/trunk/rbutil/sansapatcher/}). @@ -21,14 +21,13 @@ \begin{enumerate} -\item Make sure you are logged into your computer as Administrator, or a -user with Administrator privileges and connect your \dap{}. +\item Make sure you have Administrator privileges on your computer and connect your \dap{}. \item Download sansapatcher.exe from \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/win32/sansapatcher.exe} and run it. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message @@ -50,11 +49,13 @@ \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/macosx/sansapatcher.dmg} and then double-click on the sansapatcher icon inside. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now unmount your \dap{} and install the bootloader. -After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader installed successfully.'' Press ENTER again to exit sansapatcher and then quit the Terminal application. +After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader installed +successfully.'' Press ENTER again to exit sansapatcher and then quit the +Terminal application. \item Your \dap{} will now automatically reconnect itself to your Mac. Wait for it to connect, and then eject and unplug it in the normal way. @@ -84,7 +85,7 @@ \warn{You may need to be the root user in order for sansapatcher to have sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.} -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader