Index: manual/platform/recorder.tex =================================================================== --- manual/platform/recorder.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/platform/recorder.tex (working copy) @@ -11,7 +11,6 @@ \newcommand{\playertype}{Recorder} \newcommand{\playerlongtype}{Recorder 6, 10, 15 and 20} \newcommand{\genericimg}{112x64x1} - \newcommand{\specimg}{recorder} %Used to name the player, e.g. ...to the \dap \newcommand{\dap}{player} Index: manual/getting_started/installation.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/installation.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/getting_started/installation.tex (working copy) @@ -17,9 +17,8 @@ } \opt{e200,c200}{ \note{Rockbox doesn't function on the newer v2 models. They can be identified - by checking the Sandisk firmware version number under - Settings $\rightarrow$ Info. The v1 - firmware is named 01.xx.xx, while the v2 firmware begins with 03.} + by checking the Sandisk firmware version number under Settings $\rightarrow$ Info. + The v1 firmware is named 01.xx.xx, while the v2 firmware begins with 03.} } \section{Overview} @@ -212,9 +211,7 @@ \subsubsection{Choosing a Rockbox version}\label{sec:choosing_version} There are three different types of firmware binaries available from the -Rockbox website: -\label{Version} -Release version, current build and daily build. You need to decide which one +Rockbox website: Release version, current build and daily build. You need to decide which one you want to install and get the appropriate version for your \dap{}. \begin{description} @@ -229,10 +226,10 @@ the time is safe to use. You can download the current build from \url{http://build.rockbox.org/}. -\item[Archived Build.] In addition to the release version and the current build, +\item[Daily Build.] In addition to the release version and the current build, there is also an archive of daily builds available for download. These are built once a day from the latest source code in the SVN repository. You can - download archived builds from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. + download the archived daily builds from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. \end{description} @@ -293,11 +290,10 @@ \nopt{player}{ \subsubsection{Installing the fonts package}{\index{Installation!Fonts}\label{sec:installing_fonts} - Rockbox has a fonts package that is available at - \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml} or from the \emph{extras} link in - the menu on the Rockbox website. The fonts package rarely changes and is - therefore not included in the firmware \fname{.zip} file. When installing - Rockbox for the first time, you should install the fonts package. + Rockbox has a fonts package that is available at \wikilink{RockboxExtras} + The fonts package rarely changes and is therefore not included in the + firmware \fname{.zip} file. When installing Rockbox for the first time, + you should install the fonts package. \begin{enumerate} @@ -329,9 +325,9 @@ \subsection{Enabling Speech Support (optional)}\label{sec:enabling_speech_support} \index{Speech}\index{Installation!Optional Steps} -If you wish to use speech support you will also need a voice file, English ones +If you wish to use speech support you will also need a voice file; English ones are available from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. Download the -``voice'' package for your player and unzip it directly to the root of your \dap. +``voice'' package for your \dap{} and unzip it directly to the root of your \dap. You should now find an \fname{english.voice} in the \fname{/.rockbox/langs} directory on your \dap{}. Voice menus are enabled by default and will come into effect after a reboot. See \reference{ref:Voiceconfiguration} for details @@ -347,7 +343,7 @@ for a couple of seconds until the \dap{} resets. Now Rockbox should load. } % \opt{e200}{Your e200 will automatically reboot and Rockbox should load. }% -When you see the Rockbox splash screen, Rockbox is loaded and ready for +When you see the Rockbox main menu, Rockbox is loaded and ready for use. \opt{ipod}{ @@ -363,9 +359,7 @@ \section{Updating Rockbox} Updating Rockbox is easy even if you do not use the Rockbox Utility. -Download a Rockbox build. -(The latest release of the Rockbox software will always be available from -\url{http://www.rockbox.org/download/}). Unzip the build to the root directory +Download a Rockbox build. Unzip the build to the root directory of your \dap{} like you did in the installation stage. If your unzip program asks you whether to overwrite files, choose the ``Yes to all'' option. The new build will be installed over your current build. @@ -403,7 +397,7 @@ \opt{h10}{\fname{H10\_20GC.mi4}}\opt{h10_5gb}{\fname{H10.mi4}} file and rename \fname{OF.mi4} to \opt{h10}{\fname{H10\_20GC.mi4}}\opt{h10_5gb}{\fname{H10.mi4}} in the \fname{System} directory on your \playertype{}. As in the installation, - it may be necessary to first put your device into UMS mode. + it may be necessary to first put your \dap{} into UMS mode. } \opt{mrobe100}{ @@ -419,13 +413,13 @@ connect the \dap{} to your computer, and follow the instructions to install the bootloader, but when prompted by sansapatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall, instead of \texttt{i} for install. As in the installation, it may be necessary to - first put your device into MSC mode. + first put your \dap{} into MSC mode. } \optv{ipod}{ - To uninstall Rockbox and go back to using just the original Ipod software, connect - the \dap{} to your computer and follow the instructions to install - the bootloader but, when prompted by ipodpatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall + If you would like to go back to using the original \playerman{} software, + connectthe \dap{} to your computer and follow the instructions to install + the bootloader but, when prompted by ipodpatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall instead of \texttt{i} for install. } Index: manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex (working copy) @@ -16,18 +16,17 @@ \begin{enumerate} -\item Make sure you are logged into your computer as Administrator, or a -user with Administrator privileges and connect your \dap{}. If you have -configured iTunes to open automatically when your \dap{} is attached -(the default behaviour), then wait for it to open and then quit it. You -also need to ensure the ``Enable use as disk'' option is enabled for -your \dap{} in iTunes. +\item Make sure you have Administrator privileges on your computer and +connect your \dap{}. If you have configured iTunes to open automatically +when your \dap{} is attached (the default behaviour), then wait for it +to open and then quit it. You also need to ensure the ``Enable use as disk'' +option is enabled for your \dap{} in iTunes. \item Download ipodpatcher.exe from \download{bootloader/ipod/ipodpatcher/win32/ipodpatcher.exe} and run it. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message @@ -64,7 +63,7 @@ drag the ipodpatcher icon to a location on your hard drive and launch it from the Terminal. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you @@ -113,7 +112,7 @@ \warn{You may need to be the root user in order for ipodpatcher to have sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.} -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader Index: manual/getting_started/main.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/main.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/getting_started/main.tex (working copy) @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ are usually around. Just join and ask -- if someone knows the answer you'll usually get an answer pretty quickly. More information including IRC logs can be found at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/irc/}. We also have a web client -for joining the rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you +for joining the Rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you to install additional software to your computer. If you think you have found a bug please make sure it actually is a bug and is Index: manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex =================================================================== --- manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex (working copy) @@ -9,10 +9,9 @@ install Rockbox.} In order to make your \playertype{} load and execute the Rockbox firmware you -have just installed, you will need to install the Rockbox -bootloader. Unless bugs are found in the bootloader code, or -significant new features are added, you will only have to perform this -step once. +have just installed, you will need to install the Rockbox bootloader. +Unless bugs are found in the bootloader code, or significant new features +are added, you will only have to perform this step once. These steps use the sansapatcher tool. Source code is available in the Rockbox SVN repository (\url{http://svn.rockbox.org/viewvc.cgi/trunk/rbutil/sansapatcher/}). @@ -21,16 +20,15 @@ \begin{enumerate} -\item Make sure you are logged into your computer as Administrator, or a -user with Administrator privileges and connect your \dap{}. +\item Make sure you have Administrator privileges on your computer and connect your \dap{}. \item Download sansapatcher.exe from \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/win32/sansapatcher.exe} and run it. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item \item You should see some information displayed about your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox -bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now +bootloader. Press \texttt{i} followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader installed successfully.'' Press ENTER again to exit sansapatcher. @@ -50,11 +48,13 @@ \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/macosx/sansapatcher.dmg} and then double-click on the sansapatcher icon inside. -\item If all has gone well, you should see some +\item You should see some information displayed about information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now unmount your \dap{} and install the bootloader. -After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader installed successfully.'' Press ENTER again to exit sansapatcher and then quit the Terminal application. +After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader installed +successfully.'' Press ENTER again to exit sansapatcher and then quit the +Terminal application. \item Your \dap{} will now automatically reconnect itself to your Mac. Wait for it to connect, and then eject and unplug it in the normal way. @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ \warn{You may need to be the root user in order for sansapatcher to have sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.} -\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about +\item You should see some information displayed about your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader Index: manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex =================================================================== --- manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex (revision 19945) +++ manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex (working copy) @@ -12,13 +12,12 @@ \end{center} -Throughout this manual, the buttons on the \dap{} are labelled according to the +Throughout this manual, the \daps{} buttons are labelled according to the picture above. Whenever a button name is prefixed by ``Long'', a long press of approximately one second should be performed on that button. The buttons are described in detail in the following paragraph. -\blind{ - Additional information for blind users is available on the Rockbox website at +\blind{Additional information for blind users is available on the Rockbox website at \wikilink{BlindFAQ}. %