Index: manual/platform/recorder.tex
===================================================================
--- manual/platform/recorder.tex	(revision 20047)
+++ manual/platform/recorder.tex	(working copy)
@@ -11,7 +11,6 @@
 \newcommand{\playertype}{Recorder}
 \newcommand{\playerlongtype}{Recorder 6, 10, 15 and 20}
 \newcommand{\genericimg}{112x64x1}
-
 \newcommand{\specimg}{recorder}
 %Used to name the player, e.g. ...to the \dap
 \newcommand{\dap}{player}
Index: manual/getting_started/installation.tex
===================================================================
--- manual/getting_started/installation.tex	(revision 20047)
+++ manual/getting_started/installation.tex	(working copy)
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@
 follow the instructions at 
 \url{http://www.rockbox.org/twiki/bin/view/Main/SansaE200RInstallation}.}}
 
+\begin{description}
 \opt{ipodnano,ipodvideo,e200,c200}{
-\begin{description}  
-\item[Supported hardware versions.] 
-    \opt{ipodnano}{
+\item[Supported hardware versions.]
+  \opt{ipodnano}{
     The \playertype{} is available in multiple versions, not
     all of which run Rockbox.  Rockbox presently runs only on 
     the original Ipod Nano. Rockbox does
@@ -36,17 +36,13 @@
     Settings $\rightarrow$ Info. The v1
     firmware is named 01.xx.xx, while the v2 firmware begins with 03.
   }
-\end{description}
 }
 
 \opt{h300}{
-\begin{description}
   \item[DRM capability.] If your \dap{} has a US firmware, then by installing Rockbox you will
   \emph{permanently} lose the ability to playback files with DRM.
-\end{description}
 }
 
-\begin{description}
 \item[USB connection.] To transfer Rockbox to your \dap{} you need to
   connect it to your computer. For manual installation/uninstallation, or 
   should autodetection fail during automatic installation, you need to know 
@@ -70,8 +66,8 @@
     \dap{} should enter disk mode and you can try reconnecting to the computer.
   }
   \opt{ipod3g,ipod4g,ipodcolor,ipodmini}{
-    \index{Firewire}Firewire detection is not supported in Rockbox at 
-    the moment. Please use USB only.
+    \note{Firewire detection is not supported in Rockbox at 
+    the moment. Please use USB only.}
   }
   \opt{x5}{
     When instructed to connect/disconnect the USB cable, always use
@@ -104,19 +100,15 @@
   \opt{gigabeatf}{During installation, do not connect your \dap{}
   using the cradle but plug the USB cable directly to the \dap{}.
   } 
-\end{description}
 
 \opt{ipod,sansa}{
-\begin{description}
   \item[Administrator/Root rights.] Installing the bootloader portion of Rockbox
   requires you to have administrative (Windows) or root (Linux) rights.
   Consequently when doing either the automatic or manual bootloader install,
   please ensure that you are logged in with an administrator account or have root rights.
-\end{description}
 }
 
 \opt{ipod}{
-\begin{description}
   \item[File system format.] Rockbox only works on Ipods formatted with
   the FAT32 filesystem (i.e. Ipods initialised by Itunes
   for Windows). It does not work with the HFS+ filesystem (i.e. Ipods
@@ -125,8 +117,8 @@
   \wikilink{IpodConversionToFAT32} wiki
   page on the Rockbox website. Note that after conversion, you can still use
   a FAT32 Ipod with a Mac.
-\end{description}
 }
+\end{description}
 
 \section{Installing Rockbox}\label{sec:installing_rockbox}\index{Installation}
 There are two ways to install Rockbox: automated and manual. The automated
@@ -433,7 +425,7 @@
   for a couple of seconds until the \dap{} resets. Now Rockbox should load.
 } %
 \opt{e200}{Your e200 will automatically reboot and Rockbox should load. }%
-When you see the Rockbox splash screen, Rockbox is loaded and ready for
+When you see the Rockbox main menu, Rockbox is loaded and ready for
 use.
 
 \opt{ipod}{
@@ -491,7 +483,7 @@
   \opt{h10}{\fname{H10\_20GC.mi4}}\opt{h10_5gb}{\fname{H10.mi4}} file and rename
   \fname{OF.mi4} to \opt{h10}{\fname{H10\_20GC.mi4}}\opt{h10_5gb}{\fname{H10.mi4}}
   in the \fname{System} directory on your \playertype{}. As in the installation,
-  it may be necessary to first put your device into UMS mode.
+  it may be necessary to first put your \dap{} into UMS mode.
 }
 
 \opt{mrobe100}{
@@ -507,13 +499,13 @@
   connect the \dap{} to your computer, and follow the instructions to install
   the bootloader, but when prompted by sansapatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall,
   instead of \texttt{i} for install. As in the installation, it may be necessary to
-  first put your device into MSC mode.
+  first put your \dap{} into MSC mode.
 }
 
 \optv{ipod}{
-  To uninstall Rockbox and go back to using just the original Ipod software, connect
-  the \dap{} to your computer and follow the instructions to install 
-  the bootloader but, when prompted by ipodpatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall 
+  If you would like to go back to using the original \playerman{} software,
+  connect the \dap{} to your computer and follow the instructions to install 
+  the bootloader but, when prompted by ipodpatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall,
   instead of \texttt{i} for install.
 }
 
Index: manual/getting_started/main.tex
===================================================================
--- manual/getting_started/main.tex	(revision 20047)
+++ manual/getting_started/main.tex	(working copy)
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 are usually around. Just join and ask -- if someone knows the answer you'll
 usually get an answer pretty quickly. More information including IRC logs
 can be found at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/irc/}. We also have a web client
-for joining the rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you
+for joining the Rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you
 to install additional software to your computer.
 
 If you think you have found a bug please make sure it actually is a bug and is