Index: manual/advanced_topics/archos-flashing.tex
===================================================================
--- manual/advanced_topics/archos-flashing.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/advanced_topics/archos-flashing.tex	(working copy)
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
 
 \note{There are no separate flash packages for {\dap}s modified to have 8MB
   of RAM. You need to use the corresponding package for non-modified
-  \playertype. You should then install a rockbox image that makes use of all
+  \playertype. You should then install a Rockbox image that makes use of all
   available RAM as described in the following section.
 }
 
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item Download (or build) the Rockbox build you want to use, and unzip it to
   the root of your \dap. Safely disconnect USB.
-\item ROLO into the new rockbox version.
+\item ROLO into the new Rockbox version.
 \item Go to the file browser, and enter the \fname{.rockbox} directory (you
   might need to set the \setting{File View} option to \setting{All}.)
 \item Play the file \fname{rockbox.ucl}\opt{rombox}{, or preferably
Index: manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
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--- manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex	(working copy)
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
 \end{center}
 
-Throughout this manual, the buttons on the \dap{} are labelled according to the
+Throughout this manual, the \daps{} buttons are labelled according to the
 picture above. Whenever a button name is prefixed by ``Long'', a long press of
 approximately one second should be performed on that button. The buttons are
 described in detail in the following paragraph.
Index: manual/getting_started/installation.tex
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--- manual/getting_started/installation.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/getting_started/installation.tex	(working copy)
@@ -77,10 +77,6 @@
     and hold the \ButtonSelect{} and \ButtonPlay{} buttons simultaneously. Your
     \dap{} should enter disk mode and you can try reconnecting to the computer.
   }
-  \opt{ipod3g,ipod4g,ipodcolor,ipodmini}{
-    \index{Firewire}Firewire detection is not supported in Rockbox at 
-    the moment. Please use USB only.
-  }
   \opt{x5}{
     When instructed to connect/disconnect the USB cable, always use
     the USB port through the subpack, not the side 'USB Host' port. The side port
@@ -263,9 +257,9 @@
     patched to be used with the bootloader. If you wish to install Rockbox
     on a US \playername{}, you must first install a non-US version of the
     original firmware and then install one of the supported versions patched
-    with the Rockbox bootloader. 
+    with the Rockbox bootloader.}
     \warn{Installing non-US firmware on a US \playername{} will
-    permanently remove DRM support from the player.}}}
+    \emph{permanently} remove DRM support from the player.}}
 
   If the file that you downloaded is a \fname{.zip} file, use an unzip 
   utility like mentioned in the prerequisites section to extract
@@ -553,7 +525,7 @@
   connect the \dap{} to your computer, and follow the instructions to install
   the bootloader, but when prompted by sansapatcher, enter \texttt{u} for uninstall,
   instead of \texttt{i} for install. As in the installation, it may be necessary to
-  first put your device into MSC mode.
+  first put your \dap{} into MSC mode.
 }
 
 \optv{ipod}{
Index: manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex
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--- manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/getting_started/ipod_install.tex	(working copy)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 \download{bootloader/ipod/ipodpatcher/win32/ipodpatcher.exe} 
 and run it whilst logged in with an administrator account.
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about
+\item You should see some information displayed about
 your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox
 bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now
 install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 drag the ipodpatcher icon to a location on your hard drive and launch
 it from the Terminal.
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some 
+\item You should see some 
 information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you 
 wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and 
 ipodpatcher will now install the bootloader. After a short time you 
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 \note{You need to be the root user in order for ipodpatcher to have
 sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.}
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about
+\item You should see some information displayed about
 your \dap{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox
 bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and ipodpatcher will now install the
 bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader
Index: manual/getting_started/main.tex
===================================================================
--- manual/getting_started/main.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/getting_started/main.tex	(working copy)
@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@
 are usually around. Just join and ask -- if someone knows the answer you'll
 usually get an answer pretty quickly. More information including IRC logs
 can be found at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/irc/}. We also have a web client
-for joining the rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you
-to install additional software to your computer.
+for joining the Rockbox IRC channel so there is no need for you
+to install additional software onto your computer.
 
 If you think you have found a bug please make sure it actually is a bug and is
-still present in the most recent version of rockbox. You should try to
+still present in the most recent version of Rockbox. You should try to
 confirm that by using the above mentioned support channels first. After that
 you can submit that issue to our tracker. Refer to \reference{sec:feedback}
 for details on how to use the tracker.
@@ -72,12 +72,11 @@
 \note{This indicates a note. A note starts always with the text ``Note''.
   For easier finding of notes we have put this an icon in the margin like
   here. Notes are used to mark information that could help you
-  or indicate a possible ``weirdness'' in rockbox that would be explained.
+  or indicate a possible ``weirdness'' in Rockbox that would be explained.
 \\
 }
-\warn{This is a warning. In contrast to notes mentioned above, a warning
-  should be taken more seriously. While ignoring notes will not cause any serious
-  damage ignoring warnings \emph{could} cause serious damage. If you are new to
-  rockbox you should really read the warnings before doing anything that is
-  warned about.
+\warn{This is a warning. In contrast to notes mentioned above, a warning should
+  be taken more seriously. While ignoring notes will not cause any serious
+  damage ignoring warnings \emph{could} cause serious damage. You should really
+  read the warnings, especially if you are new to Rockbox.
 \\
 }
 \blind{This icon marks a section that is intended especially for the blind
Index: manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex
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--- manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex	(revision 20635)
+++ manual/getting_started/sansa_install.tex	(working copy)
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/win32/sansapatcher.exe} 
 and run it whilst logged in with an administrator account.
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about
+\item You should see some information displayed about
 your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox
 bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now
 install the bootloader. After a short time you should see the message
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 \download{bootloader/sandisk-sansa/sansapatcher/macosx/sansapatcher.dmg} 
 and then double-click on the sansapatcher icon inside. 
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some
+\item You should see some
 information displayed about your \dap{} and a message asking you if you 
 wish to install the Rockbox bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and 
 sansapatcher will now unmount your \dap{} and install the bootloader. 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 \note{You need to be the root user in order for sansapatcher to have
 sufficient permission to perform raw disk access to your \dap{}.}
 
-\item If all has gone well, you should see some information displayed about
+\item You should see some information displayed about
 your \playertype{} and a message asking you if you wish to install the Rockbox
 bootloader. Press i followed by ENTER, and sansapatcher will now install the
 bootloader. After a short time you should see the message ``[INFO] Bootloader